Live Through The Eyes Of Story

SONY DSCShe bounced him on her hip. His eyes lit up in excitement. He had never met his PaPa, David. David was an American GI, based in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia during World War Two. He had to leave with the rest of the GI troops when his time was up. He loved Margaret and wanted her to come back to Pennsylvania with him.

At that time she hadn’t been able to go with him, but she wrote when she found she was pregnant.

“Margaret!” a woman called from behind her, pulling her from her thoughts. She looked back to a familiar face. Her mother.
“Margaret?” She squeaked.
“It’s grandmum…” Callum looked up with a big smile as his grandmother approached them, “Is she coming with us?” Margaret blushed and looked down at her son, who was shining with excitement.

She had been caught.

“Where?” Grandmum asked.
“To see PaPa.”
“No… Margaret… You would never do such a thing…” she sighed a statement while waving her lacy fan frantically in front of her face to try rid the heat. After no answer she asked again, “would you?” Margaret rolled her eyes and sighed. Her plan failed, she tried sneaking here without her mother knowing they had gone. Mother must have heard from her friend who lived near the port. Her mother cocked her head and dropped her lower lip.
“You wouldn’t leave me… and I don’t want to leave Australia… I love it here and you should too. You were born here. Besides, do you know how tough of a time it was for me and your father when we came here on the ships from England?”
“But, Mother… please stop it. I want him to meet his dad, besides I really miss David. I need him and he needs me and Callum. We are his family.”
“No… I am. I don’t have any family left here besides you.” she lifted a handkerchief to wipe the sweat from her forehead, “He doesn’t need you!”
“Yes he does… he needs us both. Besides he bought us our passage there.” She lifted the tickets as proof.
“You won’t go!” she snapped while grabbing the tickets and ripping them.


Every person experiences life differently. That is what makes story so interesting, because every person experiences different stories or hears stories from others around them.

When in Australia I met a broken elderly woman. It bothered her that she had never met her Father. In the end, it all came down to her grandmother.

Laguna Beach, California © Devin Berglund
Laguna Beach, California © Devin Berglund

Her grandmother was too afraid of letting go of her daughter. You see, her mother had fallen in love with an American GI. One day her mother took her to the ship port. They were going to leave that day on a ship to America, but her grandmother made them stay. Forced or persuaded her mother not to leave. When I heard this story, I knew it was a story beckoning to be told…

Listening to the real woman tell me her story brought shivers to my spine. I was asking myself all these questions: Why? Why would a woman be so selfish to split up a man and woman who love each other? Why didn’t the daughter’s mother still go?

I couldn’t stop thinking about the woman’s eyes when she tried being light-hearted about the moment. Later in her life she traveled to America. She wanted to visit her dad, but found he had died before she got the chance to. So sad. It was then that I got the inspiration to write Callum’s story.

Have you ever thought an experience (you or someone you knew experienced) would make a great story? Has a grand-parent or war veteran told you the stories of their youth? Have you ever wanted to take ideas from real life events? Have you ever read a book and thought, “Wow, I would really like to create such amazing characters!” or  “I have character ideas from my life, but how can I use them?”

If you answered yes to any the above questions or have wondered these things at one time in your life then I have some secrets for you!

I am by no means saying you should steal real people’s identities for your characters, because you could get in trouble if you did exactly. I am just saying though, that you can get inspiration and ideas for stories from other’s lives like I did above. But if you do this then you need to be careful in changing the story and also the characters for your protection.

Here are a few things you can do:

  • Story Bank – Whenever I go somewhere I make sure to write ideas down. If someone tells me a story or I hear some random conversation between an elderly couple at a grocery store, I write it down. I hate forgetting story ideas.
  • Mull it Over – After hearing a story from someone and after writing the idea down I think about it and think about it some more. The more time it spends in my mind… I think the idea gets richer. And remember to ask yourself questions so you get to know the story and characters better.
    •Is this story’s character inspired by the person that told you the story?
    •Or do you have a character that is totally unrelated to the person who told you the story?

Change it Up A Bit– Once you sit down to write think of “who” your character is… the person who told you the story. Do you want them to be the character? If that answer is a yes, then you’ll want to change the character up a bit (Their name, where they live, their description, and their characterization) so that you wont get in trouble or worse sued.

  • Names – If you met a man who was a construction worker named Bob the Builder and he loves working in the land of legos and has a love interest who happens to be Mario’s girlfriend, Princess Peach and you decide you want to use those details for a story then you might want to change it up a bit.

You could change it up a bit by saying:

Bob Castaluti is an Italian painter. Whenever he paints scenes, they come to life. He also loves a woman who isn’t his. What makes it even more dangerous? She is a Queen.

  • Times – Roy Johnson an elderly man who is also a writer loves telling his grand-daughter stories of the days when cowboys and indians fought.

Changing it up: Sara loved hearing her grandfather’s stories. When he’d finish telling her the stories, she’d experience them. It all started the night that White Trees knocked on her window. He needed her help now to save themselves, to save herself, and most of all to save the spell bounding story spinner – her grandfather.

Now it’s your turn…

1.) First, tell me an interesting real life story in about 2 sentences. Maybe it’s from your life or from someone else’s life.
2.) Now, take that and change it up. It’s up to you. You can change the setting… the name, the place… the time period. Anything… You are the story spinner.

2 thoughts on “Live Through The Eyes Of Story

  1. I LOVE that you turned that actual story, into a story. I hope that makes sense, because in my head, it definitely did. Great tips, Dev! It’s always so fun to read your blog.

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